Sunday, June 1, 2008

Fighting

This the first pass on the beginning of the riot. There will be more characters added, but I'm trying to get the blocking/edit down.

V1:



V2: Tighter shot on the two characters fighting

1 comment:

sheila said...

Hi Arjun-

The difference between the two versions is very subtle. I would lean towards the close-ups. I think you really capture the chaos, but because of the fast editing you may lose track of the character who falls and loses his hat. It may not be important, because I think we will figure it out in the following shots. You may not know if it all works narratively until the next few shots are animated.

I LOVE the moment you pull away from the mother! Beautiful!!!